Added some hopefully Eno-esque strings and some drum fills here and there.
I have an idea for a melody, but since the verses have become twice as long we need to flesh it out a bit. When listening to the track I got to think about the song “Förgiftat blod” by Eldkvarn, it’s really cool how he starts spitting out words in the second verse (from about 1:55 and onwards). Maybe we could steal that trick?
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oooooh… i like this.
sounds like a movie ending. maybe a spaghetti western? or better yet, a spaghetti western set in space!!!
has a real nice buildup, like a good cure song.