Måns had an idea to put a delay with lots of feedback on the last words in each phrase in the verse, so I tried that. Sounds kind of nice but maybe shouldn’t be on every phrase. Also I added a guitar melody to the middle 8. Not so sure about that one, I think it needs to be more agressive.
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I think the delay part in the verse works best on the last phrase (out/without). I’m not sure about the rest.
I like the guitar melody. Very cowboyish and cool.
very niiiice. i enjoyed that tremendously.
nice guitary-ness. think the synths added an interesting level… and i love the sentiment in the lyrics as well…
Thanks Heather and thanks Dustin.
I’ll most likely be changing some of the lyrics and recording new vocals soon.